Knowledge and Skills Statement
Direct students to develop a first draft into a coherent piece of writing, focusing on text structure that includes an introduction, transitions, and a conclusion. Then, evaluate the introduction of student papers. The criterion for assessment may include the specific skills covered in class, such as including a creative hook, creating historical context, or establishing the setting, as well as general criteria such as orienting the reader to the topic of the essay and effectively engaging the reader.
Have students mark different kinds of transitions, such as those showing sequence, adding details, and indicating contrast, in their papers using different colors or markings. This will indicate whether students purposefully selected specific transitions to convey the relationships between ideas.
Assess students’ conclusions to ensure they include the specific skills covered in class such as conveying an emotional lesson, answering the question so what, asking the reader to consider a solution, and creating a sense of closure.
Further Explanation
This assessment example requires students to develop a first draft into a coherent, well organized piece of writing. Students should understand how to write an appropriate introduction, how to use transitions correctly so ideas are logically connected, and how to write a conclusion that wraps everything up and leaves the reader satisfied.
Research
1. Davidson, M., & Berninger, V. (2016). Informative, compare and contrast, and persuasive essay composing of fifth and seventh graders: Not all essay writing is the same. Journal of Psychoeducation, 34(4), 311–321. doi:10.1177/0734282915604977
Summary: Middle schools students write essays in three genres using background knowledge, graphic illustrations to enhance mental images, and oral reading (listening comprehension). The results of the study suggest that students exhibited considerable difference between the genre, writing quality, organizational skills, and length. The study will provide teachers with an overview of approaches that may support students to write in multiple genres. Importance is placed on assessing genres.
2. Klein, P.D., & Rose, M.A. (2010). Teaching argument and explanation to prepare junior students for writing to learn. Reading Research Quarterly, 45(4), 433–461. doi:10.1598/RRQ.45.4.4
Summary: In this study, Klein and Rose examine how students respond to various writing tasks and assignments. The teachers used the process writing approach, which included creating an outline, drafts, and a final paper. The revision and edit process lends itself to implementing teacher and peer oral and written feedback. The study reveals that there are specific as well as varied means to teach the writing process to students. Students must use prior knowledge and have access to relevant external sources (i.e. internet).
3. Composition Writing Studio. Argumentative Essay/Commentary. University of Purdue’s Online Writing Lab. Retrieved from https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/purdue_owl.html
Summary: This online resource offers a complete overview of the writing processes and the components involved in each. The overview includes definition of terms, examples, graphs and charts as appropriate, and additional resources.